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Tripple Goddess
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PostSubject: countdown   Sat Jul 28, 2007 10:03 pm

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from thousand trees
came ninehundred tears.
When they broke down
and I smokes their ashes.

From sevenhundred nights
I kept remembering one.
The one with sixhundred tears
fallen from my eyelashes

for fivehundred days
I kept waiting here alone
with only forhundred words
from wich I remembered one

after threehundred hours
I took twohundred pills
who where removed by ten,
and left me to be a no one.

And when hundred came,
I forgot to count farther.
Because night's are longer,
dan a day in the sun.

But I remember the feeling
your looks and your smile
and after days of counting,
you're still the only one.
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PostSubject: Re: countdown   Sun Jul 29, 2007 9:35 am

Very nice poem, you only spelled fourhundred wrong but I personally think it's perfect besides that Smile
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PostSubject: Re: countdown   Sun Jul 29, 2007 10:21 am

I don't have anything more to say.
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Morgan Le Fay
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PostSubject: Re: countdown   Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:49 pm

It's still a nice one indeed
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PostSubject: Re: countdown   Sun Jul 29, 2007 7:50 pm

thanks
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