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Morgan Le Fay
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PostSubject: They say   Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:05 am

They say

They would speak, the ones I do not know
Who have never knew me before and will never
They said I could claim to become something else
They said a lot in those days, and I listened.

They spoke of a life I once had but forgot
And they sold me their dreams and complains
They have given their word on a broken path
And showed me exactly the way not to turn.

I followed their leads on a blinded misty way
And look where it has brought me so far
I canít even speak without saying your name
And I canít even think without breathing your air.

I truly think they have said enough so far
And I no longer believe in a happy ending
I no longer care for what has happened so far
And I rather donít care for what I could bring me

For is it not now and no farther than this
The path of destruction has brought me
Is it not today among all other ones
That people have searched and not found me?
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PostSubject: Re: They say   Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:08 am

*applauds*

Nice work .. The first bit seemed a bit forced, but it turned out to be very, very nice.

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PostSubject: Re: They say   Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:18 am

It reads like a story.
Nicely done.

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