Tripple Goddess
High Goddess
 Number of posts : 629
Age : 39
Registration date : 2007-07-28
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Life Points:
    (1000/1000)
Character Name: TG
 |  Subject: countdown  Sat Jul 28, 2007 10:03 pm | |
| countdown
from thousand trees
came ninehundred tears.
When they broke down
and I smokes their ashes.
From sevenhundred nights
I kept remembering one.
The one with sixhundred tears
fallen from my eyelashes
for fivehundred days
I kept waiting here alone
with only forhundred words
from wich I remembered one
after threehundred hours
I took twohundred pills
who where removed by ten,
and left me to be a no one.
And when hundred came,
I forgot to count farther.
Because night's are longer,
dan a day in the sun.
But I remember the feeling
your looks and your smile
and after days of counting,
you're still the only one. | |
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Roo
Knight
 Number of posts : 1001
Age : 33
Registration date : 2007-07-29
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Life Points:
(1000/1000)
Character Name: Roo
| | Subject: Re: countdown Sun Jul 29, 2007 9:35 am | |
| Very nice poem, you only spelled fourhundred wrong but I personally think it's perfect besides that  | |
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Tilo
Liberated Slave
Number of posts : 316
Age : 33
Registration date : 2007-07-29
| | Subject: Re: countdown Sun Jul 29, 2007 10:21 am | |
| I don't have anything more to say. | |
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Morgan Le Fay
Noble Man/Woman
Number of posts : 836
Registration date : 2007-07-29
| | Subject: Re: countdown Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:49 pm | |
| It's still a nice one indeed | |
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Tripple Goddess
High Goddess
Number of posts : 629
Age : 39
Registration date : 2007-07-28
Character sheet
Life Points:
(1000/1000)
Character Name: TG
| | Subject: Re: countdown Sun Jul 29, 2007 7:50 pm | |
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